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Romeo, Romeo, where art thou Romeo?
Here I am waiting, again contemplating...


Sadness, pain, your worth that much?
How long must I wait and long for your touch?
“Out of your favour where I am in love,”
Can I not once just be your sweet dove?


May not a Rosalind be your Juliet?
Could I be thus without your regret?
Throughout this life, my only wish…
“To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss”


For which I desire, can never be mine,
Thus I must move on, will the sun still shine?
Your harmonious voice I can no longer hear,
“Can I go forward when my heart is here?”

©2007-2009 ~moonlitLeera
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Should and shouldn't, would and wouldn't... I don't expect you to understand...

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:iconcaroamy:
Alas, everyone understands the pain of love. An interesting poem!

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:iconartisticlymel:
this is a great poem! and ya should be proud of it! lol o and this is ya comment! hehe
:iconmoonlitleera:
Thank you... and love was never meant 2 be painful... *sigh*

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:iconcaroamy:
true

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:iconhellfiend:
Here I am again with an outdated comment...
That was really good wordplay to a very famous ballad. I'm very impressed! I do wish it was longer however. =D

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Facito aliquid operis, ut te semper diabolus inveniat occupatum - Always do something, so that the devil always finds you occupied
=St. Jerome=

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